Results of my first time styling bonsai :) Looking for suggestions

I gave it a try but there is absolutely no way that branch will bend that far in that direction. I cracked it in the process of trying in fact. I’m pretty sure the branch is going to die now. Don’t worry I definitely don’t blame you, it was 100% my fault. but yeah I’m kinda bummed now. Hopefully it doesn’t lead to any further health problems.